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 उन्को सिउँदो
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Posted on 12-18-06 3:09 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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कहाको न्याय हो यो
तिम्रा लागि मैले सिउंदो पुछ्नु पर्ने
खेत् बाँझो राखि गाउँ छोडि हिड्नु पर्ने

मैले बुझेको छैन के हो मर्क्सबाद्
मलाइ बुझ्नु प्नै छैन के हो मओबाद्
इ बाद् हरुले मेरो चुलो जल्दैन
बन्दुक् को तालमा मेरो छोरो चल्दैन

भन्ने तिनि आमाहरुले
न बास् पाए गाउमा
न गास् पाए सहरमा

के गर्नु ति पिडित् हरुले
गाउँ माओको बन्दुक्ले खायो
सहर् ग्यानु को रहरले खायो
सबै दौडे जुलुस् मा खै के आयो
भन्छन् गनतन्त्र ,तर थह छैन खै के आयो

मेरो लागि
मेरो चुलो जल्नु पर्छ
सबै तानासाह ढल्नु पर्छ
मेरो सिउदो को मुल्य चुक्नु पर्छ
मेरो बाझो खेतमा ,हल् चल्नु पर्छ
 
Posted on 12-18-06 3:16 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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वाह वाह वाह !
 
Posted on 12-18-06 5:52 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Thanks Mapaiiji,it was just a try
 
Posted on 12-18-06 8:05 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Good expression of real life in Nepal.

Plz keep it up
 
Posted on 12-18-06 9:58 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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वा वा । गजब लेख्नु भयो नानु जी, गजब । यती गहीरो अर्थ बोकेको कबिता बिरलै पाइन्छ । सलाम गर्छु, तपाईंको भाव लाइ, तपाइको लेखाइ लाइ।
 
Posted on 12-19-06 9:31 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Rahul dai,Thank you...it was just yet another try to write...
 
Posted on 12-19-06 9:38 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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आश प्रयाशमा जिन्दगी छ। यो जिन्दगी पनि जिउने प्रयाशमा त बाचेँको छ। जिउने आशमा त चलेको छ। नानु जी, लेख्दै गर्नुस्, पध्ने राहुल् भाइ छदै छ। कोर्दैगर्नुस् जीवन् रेखा हरु, कहिँ अमूल्य चित्र बन्न सक्छ, भाग्य रेखा बन्न सक्छ। अस्तु!
 
Posted on 12-19-06 9:47 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Hi nanu

Your poetry is nice but where is the title?
 
Posted on 12-19-06 9:48 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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कर्मयोग माथि ठाडो हस्तक्षपको विरोध । गजब छ भावना र लेखाइ । जाओस अरु पनि ।
 
Posted on 12-19-06 9:51 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Samiksya ji,Thanks for taking your time to read it...K rakhu khai title pani...Any way...bina title nai rakhu ahile...Edi Kasaile ramro title Suggest garnu bho bhane tehi nai ho bhanula ni ...hunna?
 
Posted on 12-19-06 9:52 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Thank you Maranchyase ji for understanding objective of writing
 
Posted on 12-19-06 2:39 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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उन्को पूछिएको सिउँदोले रङ्गिएर
आज म मन्त्री बन्दैछु
मेरा बन्दुके साथिहरुलाइ बनाउन राजदूत्
आज सहरमा टाएर बाल्दैछु

मेरो पनि त मनै हो,म पनि त मान्छे नै हु
रहर् हुन्छ मेरो पनि पजेरो मा हुइकिने
सरर प्लेन चडेर बिदेश् तिर हुइकिने

राजनितिमा पो छु त म ,बन मान्छे त होइन नि
जाबो गाजा तiनेर मस्त हुने,साधु त म होइन नि

तेसैले
चाहे बिदुवाले जूलुस् गरुन्,या टुहुराले
म त मन्त्री बनेर छाड्छु
जति षड्यन्त्र गरे पनि इ बुडाले
हर्केलाइ राज्दूत् बनाएर छाड्छु
 
Posted on 12-20-06 4:17 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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it nice keep it up
 


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